Voice
-Too fast
-cut offs are awkward because I'm the only one speaking
-Minor characters need a more distinct voice from the main characters
-Studder/Mumble-like at times
-Spanish is off
Visual
-Props are SO TERRIBLE
-Attire is inappropriate for a higher class of person
-Too hunched over at the "typewriter"
-Unclear as to where the person I'm talking to is
I'm just wondering what I'll be doing for the next week now.
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